|Reviews for crushed butterfly wings|
| eden is burning chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
That is so gorgeous. nicely done, loved it
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Beautiful, delicate, faint. I'm scared to read it again for fear it'll break. I just rhymed :).
I love this. It means so much more than just the words do.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
surprise surprise! I've had this on my favorites lists for months and have yet to review.
it is so much like a puzzle reading it and trying to piece together such a scrambled meaning, but either way the interputation could be right or wrong (or neither). this is a gorgeous poem though, the second paragraph I am quite fond of and the ending is just done perfectly. it has this lyrical quality to it that entrances me, each time I read I always finish it and still feel something each and every time.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
hm...it is a puzzle, isn't it? great poem!
| miss lavender chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Seems like there's a problem (possibly romanitc) That this girl is just trying to fix and make work, and she can see some temporary good results, but they never last forever.. It was a touching and beautiful work. Excellent job.
| thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
i love this piece, especially the character. you've made her into a soft spot of mine, rather well done if i may say.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
soft- it reminded me of The Beatles or Joni Mitchell. really soft and lyrical.
| acrobia chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
This is really such a beautiful and elegant piece, the title is so great, and the description itself...it is lovely, I am at lack for words. Keep up the good work!xo - Laura
| sireslayer chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
ok... so I'm trying to figure this out. The first paragraph was about butterflies while the second was something like a collage or a quilt and the third went to crushed butterflies or maybe crushed dreams. This is clearly too deep for rhyming was awesome, everything fit. I like it.