That is so gorgeous. nicely done, loved it

hannah x

Beautiful, delicate, faint. I'm scared to read it again for fear it'll break. I just rhymed :).

I love this. It means so much more than just the words do.

-Hillary-

surprise surprise! I've had this on my favorites lists for months and have yet to review.

it is so much like a puzzle reading it and trying to piece together such a scrambled meaning, but either way the interputation could be right or wrong (or neither). this is a gorgeous poem though, the second paragraph I am quite fond of and the ending is just done perfectly. it has this lyrical quality to it that entrances me, each time I read I always finish it and still feel something each and every time.

~* noelle

hm...it is a puzzle, isn't it? great poem!

Seems like there's a problem (possibly romanitc) That this girl is just trying to fix and make work, and she can see some temporary good results, but they never last forever.. It was a touching and beautiful work. Excellent job.

-Lavandula

i love this piece, especially the character. you've made her into a soft spot of mine, rather well done if i may say.

soft- it reminded me of The Beatles or Joni Mitchell. really soft and lyrical.

This is really such a beautiful and elegant piece, the title is so great, and the description itself...it is lovely, I am at lack for words. Keep up the good work!xo - Laura

ok... so I'm trying to figure this out. The first paragraph was about butterflies while the second was something like a collage or a quilt and the third went to crushed butterflies or maybe crushed dreams. This is clearly too deep for rhyming was awesome, everything fit. I like it.