|Reviews for Unexplained|
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
This was another good one, the title Explains it all. Keep it Up!
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
I really enjoyed this. The bold and italics make it stand out even more. I really like this, I can relate to where this is coming from. Keep it up. QUeenVixta
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Incredible. It has a hopeless, yet content with the present feeling. Sort of like giving up on trying to understand complexity and just being content. Yes, that what it is. And I like it. Wonderful poem.
| youzi chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
the bold lines are interesting, liked how you created deliberate irony to heighten the confusing, inexplicable feelings.. Keep writing D
| EchoDespise chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
lovin the last line there! so true, all of it!
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
This sounds ironic, but I can't explain why I like this. I suppose I like the fact that you're feeling what you write. I love that in a poem.
| Naoko Tasaki chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Wow. Very nice. You are good at poetry and original writings. Good Job!
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
this is really good. I like the flow and the way you use the words so nicely. Fits perfectly.
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
wow i like this, im not really sure why, it just makes me think, its like hmm umm i guess it shows how people can't explain what they feel sometimes and why some things happen, is the last line right? should it read "why i've fallen for you"? just a suggestion, great poem, very different x weasel within x
| EchoDespise chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
| Nestalgica chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
hm... i like it; it's really profound, a good look into the human psyche... i dunno if i spelled that right, but anyway, it was really good. The summary really tells all, yes? XD
| ElatedHatred chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
This is interesting, nice job.
| LiKePiNk chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
It's a good poem. Definitley makes sense, but in that "unexplainable" way. I get it, tho.