Reviews for Unexplained
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
This was another good one, the title Explains it all. Keep it Up!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
I really enjoyed this. The bold and italics make it stand out even more. I really like this, I can relate to where this is coming from. Keep it up. QUeenVixta
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Incredible. It has a hopeless, yet content with the present feeling. Sort of like giving up on trying to understand complexity and just being content. Yes, that what it is. And I like it. Wonderful poem.
youzi chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
the bold lines are interesting, liked how you created deliberate irony to heighten the confusing, inexplicable feelings.. Keep writing D
EchoDespise chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
lovin the last line there! so true, all of it!
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
This sounds ironic, but I can't explain why I like this. I suppose I like the fact that you're feeling what you write. I love that in a poem.
Naoko Tasaki chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Wow. Very nice. You are good at poetry and original writings. Good Job!
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
this is really good. I like the flow and the way you use the words so nicely. Fits perfectly.

Sorrow
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
wow i like this, im not really sure why, it just makes me think, its like hmm umm i guess it shows how people can't explain what they feel sometimes and why some things happen, is the last line right? should it read "why i've fallen for you"? just a suggestion, great poem, very different x weasel within x
EchoDespise chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
wow, touching!
Nestalgica chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
hm... i like it; it's really profound, a good look into the human psyche... i dunno if i spelled that right, but anyway, it was really good. The summary really tells all, yes? XD

Max W.
ElatedHatred chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
This is interesting, nice job.
LiKePiNk chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
It's a good poem. Definitley makes sense, but in that "unexplainable" way. I get it, tho.

LP