Reviews for Beautiful Eyes
hellbentheretic chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
*clapping* Bravo with this one! You have evoked clear and imaginative imagery from a subject that has needed a breath of fresh air for a while on this site. My favorite line, 'she could rasp the loveliest singers.' This is a very good use of the word 'rasp.' Thank you for not getting too sappy with the subject matter as well.

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jaepoe chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
i like the imagery you used, pretty good