Reviews for Angel
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
It's interesting; when someone is always thinking of someone; going with them; following them home, that is called obsession, but as soon as it is returned, it is love. Well written, I don't think it's particularly stalker like, it's interesting. Well written
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
It's very sweet and loving. A good short poem, but could be elaborated on. Maybe add something to it, go deeper.
mistiqe chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Gives me a dark(stalker-like) feeling. It's as though the love is obsessive and fanatical. Reminds me of Neil Gaiman's work. :)
ThatGirlInBlack chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
aw...thats was cute and sweet and happy and great once again.
Akai-MS chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
It doesn't really strike me as a stalker kind of thing. The angel is like um...a parent or something and the point of viewer sounds like he wants to protect his parent I guess...okay I know that's weird but really it does! Good job anyway!
Loriency chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
where did you get the idea of a stalker? It's hardly stalkerish. Fantastical, yes. Romantical, yes. But hardly stalkerish. It's just one of those things where the author reminiscies on sth that she wishes or dreams, and writes about it. It's very fantasy-like. This is just an assumption...and I'm barely half awake...so you don't have to take this as my honest opinion at this point... :P
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
short lines that said alot. great job!

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FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Well to me it doesn't seem stalkerish. It was rather sweet and charming. I got the impression that this poem was about love and being in love. Believe me I know a thing about stalkerish like tendecies...(Read my poem entitled stalker.) and this wasn't like that in the least. Great job. I really like this one.
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I enjoy it because of its stalker tone. Stalking is a very real human emotion derrived from the need to not let love die.