|Reviews for Forever Dream|
| fairEtales chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I love it! It is so sweet and...soothing...I don't know if that is the word. Anyway, I love it. Thanks for reviewing! Great job!
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Your rhymes are so sensual and delicate. This is truly endearing and sad.
| myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I love the style, its great. Well done. caliorbust
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
wow...such amazing work..I still can't believe you won't continue your beautiful work!This poem...is so touching and pretty. great work!
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
beautifully scripted...and thank you for my review on "A New Frame of Time" - I am running out now but will be sure to return and read more of your work! Christine
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
good; and i'm at a loss for adjectives because i am stuck on the date of this work- it was a weighted day for me as well.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
This is absolutely beautiful. The flow...the imagery... the way you express how you wish to love. Probably one of my favorite peices I have read tonight. Bravo to you.
| Trenton K. Fox chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
*smiles* I love the phrases "If only love was simple" and "For the truth to let go." I know why I like it, but I can't really put it in words, so I guess all I can say is very beautiful poem. Another very good read.~TkF.
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
poem makes me think... somehow, through the flow and the word choice you achieve a "dreamy" mood.. (yes, and the poem's about dreams..so it works!) nice work on
| Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Such a bittersweet poem that's wistful and pious. :)
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
very mesmerizing and serene. i like the flow of this, and great work!
| swift sky silver chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
very well written. i especially enjoyed the last few lines 0)
| ming yin chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
positively lovely, I quite enjoyed. very nice - ming
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
nice as always. nice...