Reviews for Voiced to God
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
A very emotional poem.. It's very personal and relate-able. I loved the lines "You heard the weakness Behind the steel" - a painful contrast.

A genius question.. And we all know the answer.

~fleur
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Oh, this is so truly beautiful. It's going on my faves on my other account. I love the honesty and depth of emotion it shows. The questions addressed to God make it very touching, they show the speaker's wavering between doubt and hope/ faith. I love your images, especially the one in the third stanza, "cry behind dry eyes" and the ideas of God's own eyes weeping for the speaker. I can completely identify with this poem.
Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Beautiful poem. I love the way it is written. Very nice job. The emotions and symbolism in the poem is incredible.
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
This was a beautiful cry out to God. *hugs* It is my profound hope that God has lifted you up in response to your cry for help. I'll be praying for you.

~*~AbunaiChikara