|Reviews for Response Poem to: My Longest Hair's Reach|
| godsandstars chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
o i liked this. nice job.
| lovedreamer chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
nice really cool!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
wow i love the ending! very cool! i can really relate to the poem, more as if it were being said to me though rather than me thinking it, if that makes sense! short but i think it says all it has to x weasel within x
| Aeritone chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Very nice...simple, yet poignant.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
yet again so deep in such short words...to cut one's hair to grasp at the person the love. It is a metaphor of great sacrifice. beautiful...
| Sweetness2005 chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Great as always tom. You no that with out me telling you though dont for all your help over the last month your a star and i love you for it.
| youzi chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
In fact I liked this one (the response) to the original poem...the last line is really stark and thoguht-provoking. Keep writing D
| Munchin chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Um.. The last line is surprising.. " to keep you withinMy longest hairs reachIs to get it cut"Interesting.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
| mistressKC chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
I liked this a lot (and the poem before it too). I think it's really cool that you write response or anti-poems. I also like you how you set up your lines to emphasize some things. I might email you later about what you said in your review, thanks by the way. -