Reviews for Silvercoated Lies
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
i can totally relate to this. great poem! ur lines just flow so smoothly together, and nice rhyming scheme. keep up the great work!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
i love the stanza you repeated
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
I liked this one a lot. Silver coated lie is a metaphor I haven't heard yet, and I really like that.

People do stupid things to get the aproval of others, whether it be spending $1500.00 on a purse to get talked about, or telling you a lie to make themselves look a little better. Which of these two people is more wrong? Who knows.. trust your best judgement with people, its all we have.
Tasbeeh chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
thats so true. I have a poem like that called: Your Sugar-Coatedness on another website. I'll put it on thiss one too, after I stop being so lazy. I like your style. Keep Writing.
jaepoe chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
the poem in itself is pretty good and i really like the snake imagery.

P.S If she developed into a pathological liar than think about the time before. if she was so close to you in the first grade or so then remember back to those days. sure people change but they should still have the same core right? just my thoughts you can completely disregard what i just said.