i like this it's really rather fun, and very well written, good job thanx for the reviews

aw, sounds like you were having a bad day when you got this one up..i hope everything is all better now..you writing is so amazing. it flows so naturally, and that's a true gift. i really loved this: ''I’m drowning here –Mouldy, festering spores,Mysterious and earthyPervade my core,My pores absorb decay.''keep it up :)

Dude ;) a) my upholstEry (you can't spell for Saltwater Taffy! which I really don't like luckily) is red, so ner, b) the thing is pretty :D and c) you're supposed to review the damn poem! haha. I love you anyway!

Dude, what's the strange little .. .. thing .. at thebottom of the page? And don't shoot yourself, wouldn't flatter your upholstry.

OMG ... it's done it again. *screams*.Why? This is supposed to be a 2 line stanza, 5 x 5 line stanzas and another 2 line stanza. It makes no sense like this. I give up. Teach me how to edit someone, preferably in simple numbered steps. Thank you in advance. *sighs loudly*