Hi again. My goodness, this poem is so good. Nicely made free-verse. It has an undescribable feeling. I don't know how to review this excellent poem. You really have potential kid. Don't you ever stop from writing these beautiful poems.

one reason why you continue to live is because of love for someone... but why are you prepared to do everything for this person?

Beautiful. I can relate. very nice way of expressing escape. I like this a lot.

It's a nicely made poem. I like it...it's simple but deep. Goodluck keep up the good work.

itz really good.. .. n nice

nice poem, i like the ending"...