Reviews for You, just you
mistiqe chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
I would say sweet. A perfect image as seen by one besotted (with love here, not alcohol).
ThatGirlInBlack chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
I think it was wonderful but the last two lines could have flowed better everything else was great. I'm loving your work right now completely.
Akai-MS chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
U say you don't like it, but...wow. I like it, it's a very very nice collections of words! It flows very well, well at least to me.
Loriency chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
hmm...I actually quite liked it. Although...at this point, from reading your bio and I think one of the other poems, the reader (one who does not know you) is left to wonder if you are bisexual or not...huh. But! I have a poem like that too...but I have an answer for it. It was really good! Much better than I could have done. I'm off to read more!
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
I like this, simple and effective
Twigstudios1972 chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I love this. This is perfect. Without a doubt this is poetry. Nice work. She is really cute isn't she?
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
That was really good! Nice rhyming and flow. Good writing.
Nocturnal Darkness chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
nice piece ya got there. i like it.