|Reviews for Fall|
| msdewey chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
This almost seems like two poems, intertwined. Some of the double lines are a bit confusing, or a stretch, but for the most part I like them. The sets of 4 I really like - especially the last few, setting the willingness of "being" against the reality of self. You can sort of tell this comes out of a rough time because it takes a long time to find it's direction, but I think the ending - that someone might never actually see YOU is a good summary. Interesting work.