Reviews for My Mistake
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
at least now you know the truth, eh? humans have this amazing skill to fool themselves in such a state that at times they cannot differentiate reality from what they want reality to be. i'm happy for you. i truly am.
youzi chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Interesting, very pensive, only I didn't like the line '‘Coz'..not because it was colloqial but because it was a bit...weird...keep writing (hope my frankness's ok with you!)D
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
A well written poem. The images of suffocation were in a way balanced by the details included like his smile and such, but it felt like you were still a little unsure as you were trying to tell yourself 'That he was my love' to move on, as did the certainty that it was a mistake did too. :)