Reviews for Untitled
Akhenaten chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
wow, that was really good! kind of long for someone with a short attention span to follow, but beautiful... I liked the sort of rambly feel to it, and the way you included the names instead of just reffering to everyone as 'him' and 'her' like everyone else... made it feel really personal. goody good, then.
Luneko chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
This poem really speaks to my heart. It's good, how you seem to have just poured out your thoughts and feelings - there are so many connections.

It is amazing, how you have opened a window to your soul, for all the web to see. It's easier when there's no face to see and no voice to hear. But perhaps we all need faces and voices most of all.

I'm sorry - I'm waxing philosophical. This is a very human poem.
justaghost chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
It's kinda confusing, to me anyway, because I'm not sure what it's about (unless I missed something somwhere) all in all though it was great.