Reviews for emily was born today |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this leaves me yearning for everything that is missing. what a fabulous concept, and written so gorgeously. loves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a soft un-fulfilling piece that is just gorgeous enough to be redeemed for its evasiveness. and your imagery is stunning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. 'to take a ride and just feel my life/ rising up and away into purple skies' are the best.-::laughs:: I'm ashamed to admit that the only reason I picked this poem to read was because my name is Emily. But having read it...it's brilliant! Awesome awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "black city and multicolored lights " that painted such a beautiful picture! nice poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. Very lovely. I adore these lines: "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives / which are screaming to be saved and whispering for redemption." So beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Oh. Simply beautiful story told in such simplistic terms. I love it. Shreds of odd memories mixed in with wonderful reminiscenses, and all of it worded so that your chest aches to be able to write that way. Wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so many quotable lines in this. really i think i'm speechless. you're quite the talent so yes again keep writing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() profound and cruel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a little all over the place and confusing... but I don't mind. It's pretty and sounds nice, almost just flows, and with some fantastic images and lines. I really like your style. The one thing I liked, because it seemed original, was the line, "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives". Nice touch, great job. Jess |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. I have no other words. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Profound and wandering in its run on lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your new name and profile. This made me think a lot of Emily Dickinson. ah, sweet loveliness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that was amazingly amazingly good! absoluteley awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a cruel, magnificent view of the city! Sprinklers at night time, in the past? Was that the situation? This is a fantastic little work. |