Reviews for emily was born today
aesthetic deficiency chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
this leaves me yearning for everything that is missing. what a fabulous concept, and written so gorgeously. loves.
not just a pretty face chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
wow, this was amazing
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
this is such a soft un-fulfilling piece that is

just gorgeous enough to be redeemed for its evasiveness.

and your imagery is stunning.
evm chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Lovely. 'to take a ride and just feel my life/ rising up and away into purple skies' are the best.-::laughs:: I'm ashamed to admit that the only reason I picked this poem to read was because my name is Emily. But having read it...it's brilliant! Awesome awesome job.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
"black city and multicolored lights " that painted such a beautiful picture! nice poem!
SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Oh, wow. Very lovely. I adore these lines: "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives / which are screaming to be saved and whispering for redemption." So beautiful.
Weeba chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Oh. Oh. Simply beautiful story told in such simplistic terms. I love it. Shreds of odd memories mixed in with wonderful reminiscenses, and all of it worded so that your chest aches to be able to write that way. Wonderful.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
so many quotable lines in this. really i think i'm speechless. you're quite the talent so yes again keep writing :D
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
profound and cruel.
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
It is a little all over the place and confusing... but I don't mind. It's pretty and sounds nice, almost just flows, and with some fantastic images and lines. I really like your style. The one thing I liked, because it seemed original, was the line, "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives". Nice touch, great job.

Jess
soft-spoken chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I love it. I have no other words. Good job!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Profound and wandering in its run on lines.
this is britt chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
I like your new name and profile. This made me think a lot of Emily Dickinson. ah, sweet loveliness.
Akhenaten chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
wow, that was amazingly amazingly good! absoluteley awesome!
HHHHHHH chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Such a cruel, magnificent view of the city! Sprinklers at night time, in the past? Was that the situation? This is a fantastic little work.