|Reviews for emily was born today|
| aesthetic deficiency chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
this leaves me yearning for everything that is missing. what a fabulous concept, and written so gorgeously. loves.
| not just a pretty face chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
wow, this was amazing
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
this is such a soft un-fulfilling piece that is
just gorgeous enough to be redeemed for its evasiveness.
and your imagery is stunning.
| evm chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Lovely. 'to take a ride and just feel my life/ rising up and away into purple skies' are the best.-::laughs:: I'm ashamed to admit that the only reason I picked this poem to read was because my name is Emily. But having read it...it's brilliant! Awesome awesome job.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
"black city and multicolored lights " that painted such a beautiful picture! nice poem!
| SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Oh, wow. Very lovely. I adore these lines: "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives / which are screaming to be saved and whispering for redemption." So beautiful.
| Weeba chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Oh. Oh. Simply beautiful story told in such simplistic terms. I love it. Shreds of odd memories mixed in with wonderful reminiscenses, and all of it worded so that your chest aches to be able to write that way. Wonderful.
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
so many quotable lines in this. really i think i'm speechless. you're quite the talent so yes again keep writing :D
| twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
profound and cruel.
| Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
It is a little all over the place and confusing... but I don't mind. It's pretty and sounds nice, almost just flows, and with some fantastic images and lines. I really like your style. The one thing I liked, because it seemed original, was the line, "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives". Nice touch, great job.
| soft-spoken chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I love it. I have no other words. Good job!
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Profound and wandering in its run on lines.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
I like your new name and profile. This made me think a lot of Emily Dickinson. ah, sweet loveliness.
| Akhenaten chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
wow, that was amazingly amazingly good! absoluteley awesome!
| HHHHHHH chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Such a cruel, magnificent view of the city! Sprinklers at night time, in the past? Was that the situation? This is a fantastic little work.