Reviews for For I Wish
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
The last stanza was excellent in closure. I love the rhythm, the rhyme, and the story it tells. "... He holds my anger/he holds my grace" Conveys his great power. "sigh changes its pace" So much in that one line, because sighs are great expressions of exasperation, bliss, confusion, frustration, freedom, etc.