Reviews for Jealousy
atalantea chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
I like it. The piece appealed to me. :D The flow is great and rough around the edges that somehow makes it all the more interesting. :D Good work. :D
Alexi Lupin chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Wow, this is really good!

I can't say I really know the feeling, but I have experienced it. Not as much as depicted here, but enough to have an idea.
ShadowNemesis chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
I feel like that... very true, very real. The emotions are so strong sometimes, and you did a really good job expressing that.

-ShadowNemesis
LyLTiArApRiNcEsS chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
o0o...this was really good. I liked it. So true although I never related, I can totally feel the emotion. Great Job.
Pantheratigris chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
w00t! This rocks. I can...totally relate...::sigh::

Nice work Pammy-love!
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Wow, I can relate to this soo much, he half the reason why I am still up at 3am. Don't you just hate it when the guy you like likes someones else and he rats on to you about her? Man I know I hate that!

Anyway this is a really great poem, going on my fav's and thankyou for the review

Eliza
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
i didnt review this yet? damn im slow! esh! lol. yell at me when i dont review :S trust me, it works then :D nice poem, good topic too!
Saeger chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Yeah, I can relate. But its an old feeling for me- it's more fresh in the eys of my friends. The one's I see daily, they feel it... And I can't help but feel guilty...But great job.
shorty140 chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
and yet another awsome poem! i can so relate even when my wonderful bestfriend stands next to me with her boyfriend all lovy dovy. keep up the great work
Icthoid Matro Coselos chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
wow. good one. I especially liked the last four lines, just put the icing on the cake. (ps... i can relate)
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
This is a really good poem. I know how you feel when it comes to jealousy, i am the most jealous person on da planet, _Anyways great job.R&R my work and i shall return the -apprentice
marie alexandria chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
aw...yeah, i think we've all been through that unrequited love thing and it SUCKS majorly. i really liked this poem, it's really heart felt and i like the tone you used. i especially liked this line ''...About her perfect flaws and I can't fix them''. nice work :) thanks for the review
Eire Rain chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Yes, I can deffinetely say I relate to this! It's very well written. I think we've all had a similar problem. Kudos to you for bringing it into words! Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!
account not in use chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Awesome. I relate very well. I love the desperation, the sadness, and the nager.
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Oh man, i can relate. I feel this terrible pang of jealousy and envy when i see the person i like being flirted with another girl. the rhythm and rhyming is awesome. _
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