|Reviews for Fandom Cereal Box|
| Relentless Bibliophile chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Hey, hon. Love this as usual and I promise I'll give you a real review later (again), but i Just wanted to give you a heads-up that FP.C screwed with your formatting again. Every time you used italics or bold, it removed the spaces after the word, so you have ukepose or semepulls, et cetera.
I do miss the line about Mary's art style with the "pretty boys naked and grinding against each other," because it cracked me up. Hahaa. But the fanfic thing is oh so much better.
I'm not sure which version I like better, since in my head all the edits melded together. Overall this one has the best points, but I have to say I miss the conversation where Sephu pressed Micah about why he wasn't doing anything, and he said he was just happy without making a scene. But that could just be me wanting more Kin/Mic time. :P
Like I said. Real review later. Don't mind me. :)