|Reviews for NO LIGHT|
| AngelaSolis chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Good poem. I like the imagery of the light and the dark ... and the unknown.
| number1hippo chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
This is one I could realte to...I like how you repeat the line"Here I go...", adds a different dimenson. Write more and check my poems when you get the chance!
| jainen-black chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
its okay but it could use more descriptive words. make us imagine the darkness all around. the deep feeling that come with it but still a good poem. keep writing:)
| Mind Barrier chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Hey there, laura. I love this poem, mainly because it describes how my life has been. (I'm better now, though). You'll like my poem, Fresh Blood...
| Charlie 21 chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
This poem I love. I've felt like this many times... Great job!
| celentia-changingacconts chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
this poem is really good. i've noticed a pattern in your work with the darkness. i think the way you write makes your poems more interesting to read. you are a good poet. publish some more!
| In Search of Sunrise chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
very mysterious...very good! haha!
| DarkPharaoh1666 chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
An excellent poem, another child of the dark.
| Miss-Nina chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Wow. This is cool. You should write more poetry, lioness. I think your good at this. It reminds me of some kind of romantic manga. Um... if you have the time, would you mind checking out my new fic, I Long For Your Voice.