|Reviews for A Simple Mistake|
| Katsui Adonis chapter 2 . 5/15/2005
I think you should put review replies at the bottom..Or if you're going to put them at the top, then bold them.
I like this chapter. I think you should continue to write this story.
| Heather F. C chapter 2 . 5/15/2005
omg! this is so fun and nice and every other adorable thing.. update soon
| Krystal Nickle chapter 2 . 5/15/2005
you should definately keep posting. i really like this story but i dont think that the first chapter was bad at all. i know the people were portrayed as jerks but i understand that it was important for the story. this chapter did clear up a little about why harvey was a butt. But i really like this story so please continue. thanks
| Nala Ether chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
this isn't that bad a story, and has an interesting premise. i like the split veiw points you have included to give multiple character actions seen in there own light.i do have 2 issues (apart from the not taking anonymous reviews, but i'll rant about that later) - its the word pictorials. isn't that a type of muscle? i trhink what you were trying to say was a photo shoot but in a more "wordy" way. nothing wrong with thing is the seemingly forced way you are desciping the emotions and personalities of your writer. i can't help you with this as i can't write to save myself (i also do the same this when i write, i'm unable to elaborate on something, but thems the breaks).i really look forwar dto you continuing this story. it had , on the anonymous reviewer this. i know people don't allow them to keep flames down (i hope you don't count this as a flame) but it does curtail the reviews people without accounts can give or those who maynot have enought time to sign-in. and any way, you can send"flames" to me,i'm starting to get cold down here as winter in packing in. there it is. i hope you update soon
| randomwordz chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
hey, i like the idea for this story, it looks good kepp writing please. I want to know how Vixen manages to get engaged. also please go into a bit more detail about how the main characters look if you please... good story. later
| Krystal Nickle chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
wow. this is a pretty good story. i will definately keep reading it and reviewing if you keep writing. man, harvey is such a butt! i know that he doesnt like her and is trying everything he can to get her off him but he kissed her back. he gave her false hopes for a split second and then yanked them away. i hope that vixen teaches him a lesson. so please update soon. i really like it.