BRILLIANT STORY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

this is wonderfully written. it's very good.

beautiful amazing sweet short gorgeous

It was very beautiful, a twisted sweet. It was short but very full and complete, like you ended it perfectly.

Ouch. Made my heart wrench, then cry. This is what I call creative story! ]

I love the storyline and the way it was written. It was just GREAT!

Wow. Just, wow.

It's sad, but really nice at the end. I guess you could call it bittersweet... and all of that in a relatively short story.

Good job.

A different take, and I liked that. Your style fit the mood of the piece, and all around, this was as enjoyable as it was different. Nice work.-Rae

wow..this is soo good! At first, the guy seemed like a sadist, but then he actually felt guilty for the things he did..and then, at the end, he saw the beauty of her love and not tears, and that was my favourite part. )

A deeper look into the minds of the mentally abusive, huh? I like it, as usual.

That was amazing...very real.

I am loving each word that I read. It's beautiful and I bet it touch the readers heart like it did with mine. Will you continue? I hope it's a yes. Anyhow, you do rock climbing? I love rock climbing but the fact that I have a weak hand that really can't support my weight, I feel dumb doing it. Any advice? Well, continue writing, kay?

This is story is simply beutiful, it's my favourite from all the one i've read before, i whish i could write something as bittersweet as this!

wow, this was amazing. beautiful, eloquent and excellently written. it was also very powerful, and nearly brought me to tears. your writing style is great, and made this piece even better. i especially loved the ending - it tied everything together nicely, and managed to be happy without cliched. kudos, and please, please keep writing. you have talent. _

Wow, that was really great. I loved the ending, it was a good ending without being cheesy. (:I'd like it if you continued but don't spoil it by continuing.