|Reviews for Change|
| Senorita Diabla chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I like the general idea you present a lot, but 'twould be awesome if you restated things so that you didn't use the word change so often. Your imagery is lovely :).
Thanks for the review! I love hearing what other people think my poetry means, don't be afraid to be wrong because it isn't limited to only my view, it is what my readers make of it ;).
| Manda Falcon chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Nice poem...the flow is a bit rough near the end, but its still a good poem. I like the concept behind it. Keep writing.
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
This poem has a good message. I like the part that goes "carefree to careless". That's probablymy favourite part. I think you could work on making it flow a bit more like apoem, but I like it too so yeah. Nice work. Thanks for the reviews!