Reviews for The Kick I Needed
arcane devices chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
i felt that some lines weren't necessary, the flow was kind of awkward and it was too long in my opinion. However, the idea of the poem deserves some credit. Good job, keep writing. -ADD
Ds14 chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
gives a sense of chaos... like, what could u have done that was so bad?
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Full of pain. Very good!
gold against the soul chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I like this poem's honesty. Well done.
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
"the kick I needed / to get me out the door" - I love that phrase. Very well written.