Wow... That was amazing. I especially love how you began this with the article and the dates. The setting is also impressive! With all the greyness and the cigarette and the bath. Update soon! Really looking forward to it!

There you go with the crazy symbols again. Hmm. You need to add to this. *quits reading cliff notes in order to read this* Yes, add. *hug*

Whoa, this sounds really interesting. I loved the hair tendrils in the water thing, that's the best thing about a bath. Looking forward to seeing what Anjie is going to do next.

You began this very well. I especially like the beginning where you quote the newspaper article. I think that quoting articles or people is a great way to begin a story... sort of like you really researched it or put time and thought into it. Good job.