Reviews for Paradise
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
That was one of the best acrostics I think I may have ever seen, awsome.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Wow, really nice. I like this.
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
It's a really nice poem it flowed nicelyand rythme was great! Keep up the great work!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Cryptic, yet lovely. Good work.
caesar italia chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
good job!

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binderem chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
You rhyme very well in this poem. I also love the word choice. Very nice, and keep it up.
jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I love the way that it rhymes, very cool
The Oddity chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
I loved it. Absolutely. Splendid rhyming, this is going on my favorites "stories" (rather, poems) list.
Blue Jellee chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
nice poem _you're a good writer
Cemetary Gates chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I really like this a lot. It's going on my favorites. )

I can't remember the name of the element... but its that repeating of the first letter. Like "Pleasent pending pearly..." That adds a lot of flavor to the poem. Write more like that!

Good job, and keep writing!
Jitterrue chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
I love your mastery over diction and the quick tonality. It just rolls right off your tongue.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Lovely rhyming and splendid alliteration! I love this piece, short but poignant.
youzi chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
loved the nice sing-song rhythm to this one! keep writing D
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
nice read, the rythm is perfect...PS nice art!
Roselillie chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Oh that's cool. I like the rhyme scheme you used. Great poem! Keep it up!
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