|Reviews for honey won't read this|
| tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
This is a pretty cool poem. But, remember, I is capitalized. Sorry. Had to tell you. But yes the poem is a really cool one.
| in tesseraction chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
god forbid i say something positive about the last lines at this point.
| breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Very despondent and heart-hitting. It's beautiful and lonely. I know- wistful.
| Mestre chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Wow. Last two lines really grabbed me.
| AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
chilling. "where was i/your lover boy/when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself" ... absolutely perfect clincher. couldn't have ended it better.
| violetsky23 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
love it. it reads extremely well. sad,yes, but it is very very good.
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
oh, wow. sad, but, you've got to be a literary genius. the last two lines are just...amazing. scratch that, EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS AMAZING.
| Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I used to be one of those long review whores.
I love the last few lines:"when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself"
Quite perfect really. The disloacting the "with yourself" from the former, gave it that extra oomph, an added complacent sadness. Cool, kudos.
| and flowers chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
the last two lines are- wow, so original.
| WiredWords chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
i love your use of informal language, the way you describe a harsh situation with harsh words, the way you let something ugly and sad be ugly and sad without romanticizing it. Very well written
| this is britt chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
so the inspirations were lost on me- but miss insomnia? my god. you are too brilliant.
| vionna chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
| hypocrite extrodinare chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
| guiter pickless chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
i like the way the beginning is odd and the end sounds unintentional, though.
| W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
so poignant. i can completely relate to the frustration and feeling of insufficiency in first stanza