o, i love the last line to this one, interesting kind of style, muchly pretty, excellent job

Absolutely amazing! Beautiful description and a wonderful theme! Keep up the great work!

Wow, I really liked how you sort of wove a little sad story into that, while using IMAGERY! I'm loving it. This is awesome. Me gusta. -Reggie

I really like this. I can't put my finger on why. It just conveys that want you're expressing so well, like I can feel it too.

I don't know why I like this, but it really speaks to me. It's not so much a poem, but it feels like you're just speaking directly to me, like we're holding a conversation. :) I happen to enjoy fall...Winter sucks in my opinion!

ahh...winter...my fav season too lol..anyways..a nice effect and a nice form too" keep doing more poems!

~DW