(once again, between a job registration course and church!)

Sheesh, depressing. This seems vaguely familiar, though .. have you been pushing this around for awhile? Anyway. I like it .. it's just really sad. I hope you feel okay.

This poem is great..it goes through so many shifts, and it's so universal in meaning because it can be so many different things. And I think you did a beautiful job with that, because writing like that can be hard to control..so good job :)!

nice job!