Reviews for Pha'dora: Green Eye, Blind Eye
mell chapter 35 . 2/3/2007
thank you for updateing!

but where are daniyel and (mind went blank can't remember what's her name)

please update again real soon!

xLilyx chapter 34 . 1/22/2007
I really like this, it's so thoughtfully written. You can tell you've spent so much time on it, especially with all the mythology (norse and celtic is so confusing) :) Do update soon!
faery tragedy chapter 34 . 12/24/2006
Heck yes! Thanks so much; it's really helpful to have this guide around. Besides, Marion Zimmer Bradley has these and she was fabulous. *faery tragedy
Counting Petals chapter 34 . 12/19/2006
I keep meaning to do a character glossary for mine. I have too many people for my own good. I guess it's my fault, because I keep going into the history of my land and such. Another thing i enjoy doing too much. And I thought the name Calliope sounded familiar.
Counting Petals chapter 31 . 12/18/2006
"The sand had ground cold under Nichara’s feet. She was gleeful at the sensation of it between her toes, the water washing more sand over her feet, making them sink. She stood very still. She felt the wind around her; everything was moving except for her. The water touched her feet and the wind touched her face. Dusk touched her eyes." I always loved that about beaches. Even though I strongly believe that a beach isn't a real beach unless you run the risk of falling off a cliff (a direct result of my spending most of my life out here on the West Coast), I do like the feel of sand between my toes.

"They do not mind that we make set up our camp on their outskirts." This sentence makes no sense. I know what you mean, but there's an extra word or two here.
faery tragedy chapter 33 . 12/17/2006
Ah, final fun, that's for sure. I really, really liked this chapter. GREAT line by Hala; it started with "Let her invent a story for herself." Hala's becoming quite the enigma. I liked the "awkward" language between the cultures-with the inkeeper's wife. It was presently nicely and it was very believable without going over-the-top. Seren is getting on my nerves. Also, I think it'd be helpful to include a character list...I think I'm having trouble remembering some of the Mummers. Anyway, good chapter! *faery tragedy
Melly chapter 33 . 12/15/2006
:D i'm so happy right now!

daniyel is not realy with her right? or were they just teasing her?

Update soon k! luv ya bye .
Satar chapter 33 . 12/15/2006
great chapter, no typo's or awkward sentencing that i could find, cant wait for the next chapter!
Counting Petals chapter 18 . 11/29/2006
"He pointed to Merrah, the center of the map," Did you do that on purpose, or am I just reading too much into it?

Ah, of the things I have the most fun writing about...
faery tragedy chapter 32 . 11/25/2006
What great advice from Hala, when he spoke of Cerdic's queen's ugly smile. It was very touching. The whole conversation was, actually. And the bit about the forest was very fascinating and mysterious. Keep it up! *faery tragedy
faery tragedy chapter 31 . 11/25/2006
Aw, it breaks my heart to have Nichara thinking about her betrothed. And the mention of Juhana brings back an odd pang of nostalgia for Cerdic's castle. Beautiful language as usual. There's a typo after "plain ones." You just forgot the period. *faery tragedy
faery tragedy chapter 30 . 11/25/2006
In response to your note-I don't think you portrayed them as larger than life; they're just mysterious and otherwordly. I like how 3D Seren is in this chapter. Her emotions are so believable. And as usual, foreboding ending that makes me want to continue reading. *faery tragedy
Counting Petals chapter 16 . 11/23/2006
This is by far my favorite chapter so far. I love how you show the complexity of Dara.

Though it also reminded me why I hate my gender, with all the pettiness over such superficial things as looks.

Can't wait to read more!
Melly chapter 32 . 11/20/2006
thank you for updating. v

I'm so happy. i don't have anything to say about this one, but AWESOME!
Satar chapter 32 . 11/17/2006
great chapter! so whats with the forest? im guessing its a bad thing that they were taken there. i cant wait to see Nicahra actualy perform with the mummers! i hope she agrees to!
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