Simple, yet beautiful!

Ah that's brilliant. I love how you ended it. And the imagery is fabulous! And I feel like i'm right there.

"And across the path, Tiny houses, Coffee shops Where lovers talked A lover’s talk" was a set of lines that I just couldn't get out of my head, the rhythm and feel of it.

Just... beautiful. It makes me want to go back to New York again.

Wonderful.

Jess