|Reviews for Six Pins and the Shaman's Mix|
| innominate noun chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
The lesson in Health class about healthy and unhealthy relationships still rather sticks in my mind to this day, and unfortunately, all I could think of when I read this was how unhealthy a relationship the pair , once I get past that, it's really quite scary. Although, I suppose some of that is because of that relationship...and now I'm rambling.I think that this needs a bit of reorganization. It's kind of difficult to tell, sometimes, which is flashback, etc.; so I think that it would be much clearer if, say, you put it in chronological 's basically my only complaint, so, great job!
| Katrina G. Cortious chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Wow, this is... weird. I have no idea what 'Scratched on the Side' or 'Between Vermin' is. But it's good. I like it. The style reminded me of a story I read once. Kind of Zita-ish. XD;
Good work. :D