| Reviews for Paint me a picture |
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   Blackangle2011 chapter 4 . 8/13/2008 gr i hate authors who dont finish there stories |
| LittleEmoKid chapter 7 . 5/20/2008 My word love. Where to start? Jeez, you are doing such a great job. Keep it up and write more. I think if you don't write more I just may go styreotyped emo and cut my wrists the rythem of some screamemo music. The way you explain things is quite interesting. There is a gentle side to Tristian. If he would only show it abit more. But alas the vampire in him shows more. I find this part of the story particullarly hot and appealing. Nothing too much, but just enough to give it a good edge. This is really good. Keep it up. Oh, and if you get a chance, perhaps you could read abit of my work. |
| Rio's Desire chapter 7 . 2/24/2008 Oh. I really hope you do decide to finish this one, once I read the first chapter I couldn't stop reading it! |
| Atomical chapter 7 . 11/27/2007 update it! |
| Heth chapter 7 . 11/18/2007 Awesome so far |
| Blackangle2011 chapter 3 . 11/12/2007 update update update son ! |
| tasi13 chapter 7 . 11/9/2007 i love your story. |
| Blackangle2011 chapter 7 . 11/1/2007 i love this story. please don take long to update ! P.S. I hope they dont fall in love in this movie |
| Blackangle2011 chapter 6 . 7/6/2007 This story is REALLY good! update soon |
| Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 6 . 5/4/2007 I LOVE your story! You should continue it! |
| velvetstargirl chapter 6 . 9/30/2006 this is such an amazing story, and you've left me so curious!please write more...amber is a beautiful character, she has depth and she's relatable..but not only that, you see her changing...which is really please write more! |
| Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 7/22/2006 omg i really love this so far! it's really deep, which is rare to find here (unless i'm just looking in the wrong places) but anyway, this is a fantastic start |
| Praemonere chapter 6 . 6/11/2006 This story is very well-written. I've been following it for a while, and I've loved every update. It's intense and, unlike alot of stories, has an interesting plot to it as well as the sexual scenes. Makes it all the more enjoyable to read ) Update soon.. Please? |
| Pat Robertson chapter 5 . 6/9/2006 Ms. Delanie,I belive that you are a very talented writer. However, I don't think it is appropriate for a young woman like yourself to be writing such mature and vulgar material. I know your characters are merely fiction, but they can become very real as demons manifested in your mind. And they can make you do things you don't want to do. My advice to you is to save your soul by abstaining from such horrendous activities such as writing these explicit stories. Why, with description abilities like yours, im sure you will be great with writing children books. Turn away from sin, my child! Be free from the darkness that enslaves your soul like rusty chains! Be at peace! |
| warmdecember chapter 6 . 5/14/2006 great story! very intense..keep updating |