very interesting story. i hope to hear from you soon with the next chapter. update soon!

wow this is amazing.. i love this story.. i hope you update. if you don't i'll be going nuts.

Oh! It's been so long since you last updated, I know, but if you could update soon, I'd be so happy! I love your writing style! Please, continue to write more!

oh how i love this haha wonderful job! and i really enjoyed this chapter alot. The only thing that for someone gave me the wrong feel was when he called her a bitch... i mean i wasn't expecting him to call her anything else it's just that it caught me off guard i suppose lol i'm guessing i'll have to wait for more character info. Cuz i'm with Amber, that man is a total mystery to me ;; update soon!

Hey! I love this story! And this, is my favorite chapter too! _ Keep up the good work!

Gr, Tristan is evil. I wanna scratch his balls off and make him eat 'em! Wow, I wonder how they figured out how to give painless bikini waxes... That lucky bitch! Lol!

Oh my gosh that was awesome. It was so...interesting...awesome cliffhanger. It makes you desperate for more. sorry, i'm the worst when it comes to reviews. All i can say is i'm hooked.

i thought it was a wonderful chapter! and about the blacking out...don't worry about it! i would be blacking out like that too if i were in her situation ;; great job!

Gah! That's all? No! Write more!

You've got to continue this... I love the intensity of the time limit. That's something I haven't seen before.

Yes! Finally! It was great! Totally awesome! Hurry up write the next chapter and write it faster than you wrote this one!

Tell you what, you update this, and I'll make a story out of my poem. Please?

Eh... You need to update!