Reviews for Moving On |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Glad there was no hitting or the like. Some things I didn't understand from the other story- I don't know if I'm suppose to know about the whole Terry thing... but I can't start a new story right now.. no time. Hopefully I won't need to. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :-) Brilliant chapter. Updateness! |
![]() ![]() this was great. i went and read the other chapter. heh, I can't wiat to read more! sorry i didn't feel like signing in.~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh, that was mean, making me read the other story like that! *i just had to know the reaction...which was pretty funny, by the way) eh...so so conversation. LOL lee still sounds like a spoiled ass. still love him though. |
![]() ![]() I love you, you love me we're a happy family...lol thats gota be one of THE most annoying songs ever! lol. so they're finally in australia? yay ::bounces:: ooh i need to read more, i wanna see how everyone reacts...you must write more and keep up the great work cause this was brilliant! luv ya muchly emerald ravenx x x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really don't think I have reviewed this yet, have I? That's surprisingly horrible of me, since I do love this story. Or I don't know, mybe I reviewed once? I should have checked... I lose track sometimes, because I print usually print out chapters of stories in order to read them. I think I quite honestly have every page of your story printed out. Right, onto actually reviewing. I'm horrible with rambling sometimes. Anyway, as I've already said more than once, I love this story. I like having Damon in the American setting, it makes it easier to imagine him with an accent. And I adore all your characters, so it's excellent to see them continuing to get attention in your stories. I especially love that everyone seems to be getting married and/or engaged. The bridal shower idea was brilliant. This feels like a rather abrupt place to end my review, but I kind of have to go. So yes, I look forward to your next chapter! Yay for the crossover with princess max! Oh yes, I forgot to mention, I also love that everyone invited themselves along on the trip to Australia. This should be fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm hanging, hanging...hanging onto every word, hoping that they finally GET THERE. and now they have, and i'm left wholly WANTING MORE! *more more more, how do ya like it, how do ya like it? MORE MORE MORE* it was amusing though, the talk about Trent having it in him to be a sex fiend. i cracked up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD They are so cute. Now that they've gone over and seen Brett's crew already in princess max's story you need to write fast! Don't let her get ahead of you, OMG~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, Brett is going to *KILL* him if he tries to hand over money. Please, please don't let Damon try and give him the money if anyone else is around. However, Damon is incredibly sweet and thoughtful. And you update so fast; I need to speed write tonight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoah... the gang in australia.. i was worried that they might be murdered by joey and his erm...singing... anyway, spongebobs rocks! south park is the worse shit of all... man... why does brian have to like it? hmm.. this time i'm with kevin. update soon btw. you dont wanna keep the peeps out there waiting. P |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol the ending has to be one of the best so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! australia! and yay for sex fiend *_* lol XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! They're there! (well here, for me, really...). Haha. Trent and Damon are sex fiends! I love that word, fiend. Loved the chapter. Was very well written. Funny too...Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. this was great. can't wait to read the actual meeting with brett! write more soon~Mel |