Reviews for Moving On |
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Vaush chapter 20 . 8/2/2005 oh! it was so sweet! (tear) Oh. cute! I love it! yay! keep it up! dont liten to what other people say. your writing is the best! super! so keep writing. I dont want to lose another great author! you proably wouldnt do that but i'm scared someone will... yeah! so keep writing! I was sad when I didnt see any new updates for a while... |
eldrin chapter 20 . 8/2/2005 Ah, I don't even *know* Joey and Cindy and I'm glad that they're all happy together now. Lots of weddings... Cody is semi-hilarious with all his inquisitiveness. Poor Damon. I adore your writing! I realize that I need to hurry and read the rest of your works. |
ryen chapter 20 . 8/2/2005 yay...joey gets his. very cute chapter...keep em coming |
Rose's Kiss chapter 20 . 8/2/2005 aww. how sweet! that's adorible. I love this story. I can't wait to read more~Mel |
princess max chapter 20 . 8/2/2005 They're back together! Joey and Cindy that is! Oh dear, poor Cindy. And poor Joe. But eloping is cool; it saves everyone the pain of having to sit through a boring wedding. And Trent and Damon are still circling each other like lusty, loving, men. *Gr* I feel bad for Trent; if Damon waits until they're in their own apartment then Trent won't get a nice Christmas present and that would just be blergh. Finally, I didn't see anything wrong with your writing? Oh lord, I recently found my first story I wrote when I returned to writing (at 22) and holy damn is it bad. Truly, *nothing* I've ever read of yours even comes close in crappiness. |
ShadesWithLove chapter 19 . 8/2/2005 love your story.. hate your cliffhangers or whatever you call them.. update soon k? |
K. T. Wood chapter 19 . 7/23/2005 Haha. That was funny! Whoo Kevin and Jason! Love it. update again super dooperly soon.. |
WarriorHeart chapter 19 . 7/22/2005 NO! I can't believe you just ended it there like that! More NOW! |
LooseNativeMoose chapter 19 . 7/22/2005 just such a happy chapter, don't even know what else to say :D |
Maris. S chapter 19 . 7/21/2005 WAI! *death to the google power* I can't believe that you left off there! I know , I know, I'm always like this, but there are one too many cliffies x.x Anywhoo, I liked the way Damon approached things when he first met Cindy. About the whole 'partnes roommate' thing and Trent not denying that they fucked like rabbit b/c in actuallity, they did, and I think that they liked it too v Anywhoo, you know what I'm going to say; Please updae sooN! |
Maris. S chapter 18 . 7/21/2005 I like Joey. He seems to be the smart one *lol* Teehee, like hell Damon doesn't want Trent. If he didn't feel so badly for him, he wouldn't think that he was being so much of a burden and making sure he has the 'right' present to give to him for christmas... I think that he should but himself in a large box with purple sparkling wrapping paper and a pretty bow with lots o ribbons! And o course, he'd have to be nude V On to next chappie! |
Maris. S chapter 17 . 7/21/2005 Yay! i'm back to reviewing this story! My comp has been really crappy lately so I'll try to read all of your updates while it still likes me . I liked this chappie. Iono why, but now maybe Brain and Damon will remember they do have something while they are having one of their rifts. Since ya know, it wouldn't be normal without them having silly arguments. yay! Another chapter! |
Vaush chapter 19 . 7/21/2005 Your on a ROLL! Cheesy way to say it: Call you butter 'cause your on a roll. ok that was weird but you out lots of goodies up this week! yay! that is really awsome! Damon is meddling! yay! I loves it! It is weird how it confuses everyone that Damon wants to help. I loves Damon! |
Endowment's Seraph chapter 19 . 7/21/2005 this is great. smart one damon is. heh. write more soon~Mel |
Stefen chapter 19 . 7/21/2005 :-) Yay for Jase and Kev! Hehehe. Update! |