Reviews for Time Marching On
ShadowNemesis chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
I love the personification of Time here... very realistic and vivid. Excellent work.

THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Each line is great. A good reminder.I like the format.
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Oh so neat, so true. Thoughts I've had before but couldn't figure out how to put them into a poem. V/good! Great job, I like.