|Reviews for Self Portrait|
| Bird That Flies At Dawn chapter 9 . 9/11/2013
| Bird That Flies At Dawn chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
This is really...just emotional. I love it.
| softersin chapter 8 . 7/17/2008
"so i guess all thats left
is to change your colour
to automatic instead of ruby red
on msn and forget about you.."
I did that to the person I like too !
this whole collection of poetry just wows me.
Keep it up ! :)
( and stay strong )
| Juni chapter 4 . 11/8/2007
I'm sad that you said you aren't coming back. I'm also My New Pen Name. . . I sometimes forget who I reviewed under which name. . .
This is amazing. I'm so sorry about whatever problems you have had. . . it seems like we may have had a lot in common, so this really touched me. If you ever want to talk, or if you have any poetry to share, send me an email:
Truly beautiful work.
| account not in use chapter 12 . 2/26/2006
ohmygod. this is...me. and that hurts. You write amazing poetry.
| lovelikeamixtape chapter 11 . 2/19/2006
"like the lady bird you smashedso you could put down your dietCoca-cola- i'm just always in the wrongplace at the wrong timebut you're so hard to avoid these daysever since you scrawled "mine"across my forehead in magic marker"LOVE. you amazing. end of story.
| crimsonfirefly27 chapter 12 . 12/27/2005
keep writing, i loves it.
read some of mine sometime, if you have time.
| akaSummer chapter 12 . 12/9/2005
Wow. This entire collection (is that the right word?) was excellent. The entire thing was amazing.
| akaSummer chapter 2 . 12/9/2005
I like this one. The separation of the words, like in-sane-ly and dis-may-ed (along with all the other embellished words) make this an interesting read.
| akaSummer chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Every word of this is written excellently. The imagery is simply amazing.
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
oh. my. god.
| addie pray chapter 12 . 10/19/2005
You are amazing. I read this glued to the screen (shivering in 89 degree weather). Your portrait outshines that Mona girl.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 12 . 9/5/2005
very strong emotions in here. touching and heartfelt by the true words of hate, and yet love.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 11 . 9/4/2005
very well written and the ending was quite the surprise...great work!
| tears from heaven chapter 12 . 9/3/2005
Wow - I love the way you write, theres something bizarre and vividly expresive about it. I loved the lines:'i search for love in the trashcan'
'if you werent real id make you up'and 'when night rolls inand day rolls out for one second thesecret sheets of moonlight reveala shimmer of vulnerabilitythat sugestsmaybe ...you're the one that needs me.'
again...wow! I wish i could write like you!