Reviews for What I Want
Haven of the Shadows chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
beautiful. sad. but beautiful.
Sprkles620 chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
WOW! Awesome poem. this poem describes exactly how i feel about a guy friend of mine!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
very beautiful and honest piece! AND A BIG CONGRATS! on getting published...if I can help anytime...feel free to ask if I can
La Editor chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Lovely! The way the stanzas work is unique and easy to read. All I suggest is to add more... eh, emotion? I dunno, maybe it's me. Probly is, I'm going through a bout of depression, so that's me . Keep writing. Ja ne!~kaya
Dying Rose chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
I really like how this poem just flows into each line, especially the last ones. It's beautiful and I have been there before, I can really see myself in this one.
Yorba Linda chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
O_O! Wow, this one is incredibly amazing. I really love how it flows right into the last lines. I could connect with this one also, very good. One of my favorites.
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
very meaningful and vulnerable. I enjoyed this and respect it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
i love the format & the ending