|Reviews for Project X|
| TURNER35 chapter 1 . 4/29/2021
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NôvelStar, just submit your story to hardy nô or joye nô
| C. Richard Crawg chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I don't suppose you're going to be continuing this story anytime soon, but if you do, I'll read it.
| Colton M. H chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
I like it. Is his ship, The Black Cat in English, named of a purple cat? A green one? How about a yellow one? I'm serious man, what color was the cat?
| giveGodtheglory chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Well written. I'm hoping to see more. But corn and potatoes don't usually get transplanted, sensitive roots.
| DamascusDragon chapter 2 . 6/2/2005
I like it a lot so far, you should really keep writing.
| AycayiaGoddess chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
this is quite short, a 'tidbit' u mite say. But i think something like this has promise, for a better, awesomer story! soz bout the grammer
| Leylique Morrow chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
I like the idea of it. I'm wondering what time period this takes place in. Your wording is very modern, so I'm assuming it's present-day. It surprises me that Rio is not defensive about his age. Maybe that's just his character.
"But I've never gotten into a lot of trouble, 'til I turned seventeen."
I think it should be "But I'd never" or "except" (instead of 'til).
I'm eager to read the rest of this story. It sounds quite interesting. -Leila