|Reviews for Nalani|
| Menebar chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
Nice chapter. Gamlyn sounds so cute! The chapter was a lil short. A bit unusual for you... So anyways, it was a good chapter and the introduction of more unusual, yet amusing characters was good too. I'll talk to you soon, L8ERZ .:HannaH:.
| Menebar chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
Keeps getting better. Write more 't wait till the next you're well, luv from.:HannaH:.
| Skyla Moon chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Interesting - I like how you set it in the middle of a battlefield. Please forgive me for being a grammar nazi, but near the beginning you say "Us men" and it should be "We men." Keep writing!