Reviews for Art Deco
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
i like this. especially the last line. keep writing :D
horrible writer chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
A well constructed poem that was original and touching. There was one or two lines where I felt the word choices you made didn't really fit in with the writing style of the poem: "And the knowledge fills my brain That it is hopeless now." These two lines have a sort of weird rhythm, and I despise use of the word hopeless. The rest of the poem was extremely well written, with an elegant, artistic, and beautiful style. It reminds me of Williamsburg (the one in Brooklyn, not Virginia). Anyways, an excellent job on a really wonderful poem.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
" and my art-deco memories mean nothing now" great line, very powerful and emotive images used. wonderful stuff.