Reviews for how can
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Good one...
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
true indeed! *applause* lolxRachx
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
we wander fragmented,

asunder,—then ponder,

¿who will for us pander?

¿could we have been grander?

with oleander white,

remander our soul's trial,

¿would candor been blander?

we were just bystander.

p.s. your poem strikes at the very heart of objective and subjective reality. ¿how much can we share with our different perceptions and experiences of that "world out there"? m
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Maybe reword the extra "know" and then it will sound nicer. How can you ever know? It is a tough question...
Anna178 chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Again you have an amazing talent for creating beautiful things with a small amount of words. I envy you. *rolls eyes* it takes me much longer.

this is britt chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
insightful! I liked it.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
so simple, but truly effective.