Reviews for Pity
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
aw so sad... especially that ending
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
again very nice
account not in use chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Love your bio, Bush is an idiot, and I love Keeping You A Secret...Anyway. I love the last line, sad and painful.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
The ending, is really powerful though a tad cliche. Though who in heck cares? I really liked it, angst is done well and the poem is really touching. Well done and keep up the great work!

!* noelle *!