Reviews for waiting for that feeling to come
this is britt chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
gah. you are majestic. thank you for the praise I don't deserve- you're more amazing than I could ever dare to be.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
It seems like a long sentance to me, just because it's not broken up. I'm so standardised - without line breaks, it's just got to be prose :p Anyway, ignoring this: Initially, it starts almost sounding like a saying or common phrase. Something agrandmother would say. I liked the starts to the last two lines more: "but sometimes, sometimes you come out warped.." and "you wonder when you and she came out of the fire ruined..."
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
that's a really awesome...er...analogy? sorry, i always forget the word for it...but WHATEVER. It's good, I liked it. It's fabulousfabulousfabulous. -dances- Great description imagery, etcetera. I like what you present here. Lovely work.
addie pray chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Awesome. I get that.