Reviews for Not Enough
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
love it. the emotion is so raw & relate-able. great work.
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
i wonder who's point of view this is, i'm just curious. i mean, hey, you never know.
Kinna chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
This poem was okay. What really first caught my attention was that I watched Witch Hunter Robin too. The words are sweet and gentle, filled with longing. The only thing is that sometimes your grammar wasn't quite right. When you start the lines "when will be that day / is there such / when we will put our differences down" they don't match the tense of your previous lines. Anyhow, it takes courage to post writing for complete strangers to read and review, and I'm glad you posted this.