I love this! I really hope you finish this, although I sincerely doubt it. :'( You've captured all the emotions perfectly!

"You know, the snow suits you. You look like an ice goddess with the snow in your hair and that glare on your face."

THAT LINE WAS PRICELESS. XD

Uh oh! That's why I "get rid of" my own notes. :X I would probably beat that kid up though. [the one who would dare shoving me.] :P

Sweet, dorky, but never update :p

Great chapter! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!

N'aw! Very sweet story.

WTF! i woulda tried to at least see who said that instead of just running blindly...geez. Impulsive girl.

great storry

great writers

but i hate it when a storry isn't finishet

i hope you will restart writing at it again

i realy do

you really really really really need to update, i want more

absolutely awesome

i love this story

and although you havnt updated for the last 500 years

i will dutifully wait

please continue

i love this storu

your awesome

ciao

Sam

I like Erik. But where did you two GO?

hehey, good job! Question, though. you wrote someting here, i'll quote u

"I try to celebrate christmas as regularly as possible..." (or something like that)

It just sounds werid, that's all. Wouldn't you just say, i celebrate christmas every year?

anyways, it sounds great, your style of writing is quite advanced, and I get the immpression that you're cowriting it. Are you? I once tried that with a friend of mine and we got pretty far, 16 chapters.

anyways, I'll put a story alert on this one.

TTFN!

You should finish this.

Nice! Please update. There aren't many good f/f stories on FP and then here I find one and it hasn't been updated since 2005!

~Ayenti~

haha. this was a funny but sweet chapter! loved it!

keep up the great work!

-naomi