Reviews for Incomplete
Cadience Gemma Topaz chapter 6 . 8/11/2005
I love the feeling behind it, it's awsome...its good work, just a little scattered
citrus scented chapter 4 . 7/27/2005
intense, and effective, espeacilly the last line.
born-again chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
All brilliant, but i particuly like the fisrt, "feeling dizzylost without a drink" has got to be something everyone can relate to at some point!
SweetChildOfTheNight chapter 6 . 6/25/2005
wow, richtug gut
SweetChildOfTheNight chapter 3 . 6/25/2005
gefällt mir sehr gut, sehr ausdrucksstark
SweetChildOfTheNight chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
really nice
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 6 . 6/22/2005
this is good. once again splendid detail. great work!

~Sorrow~
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 5 . 6/22/2005
short..but very nice. Great work!

~Sorrow~
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 4 . 6/22/2005
quite good. i like it. At first love..then gone..

~Sorrow~
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 3 . 6/22/2005
this one is quite interesting...almost like a horrow poem

~Sorrow~
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 2 . 6/22/2005
good detail and description. I love it. this is really good.

~Sorrow~
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
this is good. I love the detail brought into it. awesome job!

~Sorrow~
youzi chapter 2 . 6/20/2005
a suggestive, intelligent piece..not at all vulgar despite the bold keep writing D
secret thoughts revealed chapter 6 . 6/12/2005
hi cool stuff even if its a little random but nothing wrong with random
ShadowPharoh chapter 6 . 6/11/2005
fasntastic! great poem, greater poet!

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