Reviews for Torn Petals
Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I've seen someone's petals torn off... its as ugly as you put it.
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
I really didn't mean to read and review ALL your stuff, but what the hell. Its good, so I will.

This is another awesome piece. "She looked like someone tore the pices off her." The only words that describe that phrase are the cliched "shattered innonece" both in the speaker, and the girl herself. There is something sad in how well the girl (or boy, I suppose, but I get the feeling its a girl) watching understands and interprets the ruined life before her, and how you captured that is flawless.
and flowers chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
amazing.
sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
WOW. that was really amazing and i loved it.
Ish Mish Kiki chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
It's very touching, and I love it
MIDNIGHT-PIXIE chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
wow-very intense. very well written. amazing. i loved it. wow-kara
the-beautiful-tragedy chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
oh that was a fantastic piece of work. Like a monologue of description to a story. Is there going to be more?