This is quite good. Meaningful descriptions make this a thought provoking piece to read. Good job.

I assume the absence of Capital letters is a conscious decision-In any case, I like it, It adds a feeling of simplicity to the most complicated poems.

it's circularly, i like it, confused, nicely done

Wow! I love this poem so much! I can't really pinpoint exactly whats so great about it, but it's just really beautiful. I feel like it describes how people can sometimes change you. Good job!

~Kristina

"the words that you once said / i found there was nothing of mine left / only yours instead"

You write insanely well. Your poetry really makes the mind think.

Beautifully crafted, I love the prardox!