Reviews for Everything to You
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
i'm not sure that i understand this as you probably intended the reader to, however, this has a really really nice sound to it. 'as the skin of my yesterdays have been replaced with the broken glass chains of rememberence; and i am all of this to you' that's an awesome couple of lines there. great job.
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
And you become just a memory... truly amazing.
Opticalillusions chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Okay quick thing-there was a very famous author who said that everyone in his or her life should consider they have only three exclaimation marks avilable to them in their WHOLE life-this should tell you where and where not to use them. The capilization is a little capitilize a couple of the words or letters? I like the image of the "broken glass chain" and the mixing of long lines with the single words.